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Don't you dare judge me
I'm a human being
Not a 'ragamuffin' with no sense of style
I choose based on comfort, not colors
And I act how I want
I dress badly for the school pictures because
They always try to
Make me look pretty
You're taking a picture of
Not some sweet little girl in the eighth grade

Don't you dare touch me
My arms are tender
And my face is bruised
I fall down a lot
Don't touch my hair when I mention
I hate when people do that
I'm a girl
Not a Barbie doll
Even if I look like one

In fact, don't even look at me
I don't mind someone
Who pays attention to detail
And points out mistakes
But on you, I hate it
Because you only ever
Find mistakes
In me

My pouch is a safety net, not a complication
No, don't take it
I need that
I'm scared without it
Don't ask me to change
My feeling of security

I don't over complicate things on purpose
So quit acting like I do
You wonder why we don't
Have the best relationship
I'm always being judged
The smart people deviate from the pack
Not force others away
As you do
I'm not sure if the beginning is about school photographers or my mother.

Fangirl feels,
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I under stand this because I experience it almost ever day
Blindstar97 Nov 16, 2012  Student Writer
*le gasp* I love the word ragamuffin! :3

But you know, your mom is just looking after you. Preening your feathers like a mommy swan to her baby; her cute, fluffy baby. Awww.... you're such a cute baby swan...

... What was I talking about again?
LoneTaku Nov 17, 2012  Student Writer
If looking after me means getting into fights with me every other day because she thinks the pants that SHE bought me are ugly, then yeah I guess she is.

I'm... A baby swan? Okay then. I'm not sure how I feel about that.
Blindstar97 Nov 17, 2012  Student Writer
So cute and fluffeh... *cuddles*
LoneTaku Dec 31, 2012  Student Writer
*bes cuddled* ('bes'... I'm smart...)
Blindstar97 Dec 31, 2012  Student Writer
914four Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
"It may be necessary temporarily to accept a lesser evil, but one must never label a necessary evil as good." - Margaret Mead
Hang in there :-)
LoneTaku Nov 16, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks. T-T
UnderTheMaskOfMen Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is amazing. Unbelievably easy to relate to, despite the fact that I'm a guy. This is... the story of my life basically.... Thank you for writing this.
LoneTaku Nov 15, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks, and you're welcome. 8) Thank you so much.
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